I like that. I like that though there may be a disagreement and you're firm in your own opinion, that there's that dialogue happening between reader and author. I like that Zam gave you a long review too! Though you didn't agree with it, that's probably the first really critical comment I've seen. Well, I can't say that. Recently I read a certain terrible, terrible badfic and someone (out of the plethora of positive comments) someone finally had the balls to tell him that he wasn't rewriting the Bible and spell check would probably help him.

Great list! I completely agree with this: If I can't hear the character say the lines in my head, then there's a problem there for me.

Shudder to the sex mentions, hahahaha! I just ... that's when it's time to run away and never be seen again. Some people just don't write sex well. They don't.