Terrific job conveying how Luke observes and feels about Reid leaving after the phone calls. It created real suspense for me also. It was obvious that something was going on and I was curious to find out.
Loved how you showed how connected Reid and Luke are to each other.
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Date: 2011-06-07 06:56 pm (UTC)Loved how you showed how connected Reid and Luke are to each other.